The river spirit

[pause2ponder]

Such richness, such pace - I would love to hear you read this!

[Josefin Waltin]

Thank you so much! I just did a recording, it's at the top of the post.

[pause2ponder]

I could hear and see the water "dancing on pebbles" in sunlight - delightful!

[Josefin Waltin]

Thank you for encouraging me to record it!

[Ingrid Groot Zwaaftink]

Love this!

[Josefin Waltin]

Thank you! 😊

[Beth Kempton]

Oh I love this Josefin. I hope you will allow more poems to be written through you.

[Josefin Waltin]

Thank you, I will! 🌸

[Phoebe Freer]

This is beautiful, flowing, lyrical. So much varied river imagery, but also suggestive of so much more. Lovely. 💜

[Josefin Waltin]

Oh, thank you! 🤩

[Natalie Matson]

This is a beautiful poem Josefin. It completely reflects the spirit of river. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing your work with us.

[Josefin Waltin]

Thank you so much! 🌸

[WENDY CLARK]

Beautiful Josefin, this is my favorite so far. Looking forward to reading more of your writing!

[Josefin Waltin]

Oh, thank you! 😃

[JC Voght]

I hear the river and also feminine power throughout your piece. Power and resiliency. Thought provoking.

[Josefin Waltin]

Thank you! 🌸

[JenP]

Beautiful words. So atmospheric.

[Josefin Waltin]

Thank you!

[Gill Brindley]

Once again, beautiful writing. You have a knack of taking me along with you, my minds eye has the clearest picture of the river. Thank you.

[Josefin Waltin]

Thank you, I’m so glad you joined me 😊

[Samantha]

This is beautiful Josefina. Long may your pen keep moving, like the river x

[Josefin Waltin]

Oh, thank you! 😘

[Ta Hiron]

This is lovely, I can envision how your pen did move across the paper, it flows beautifully.

[Josefin Waltin]

Thank you so much! 😊

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[Josefin Waltin]

Thank you! 🌸