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pause2ponder's avatar

Such richness, such pace - I would love to hear you read this!

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Josefin Waltin's avatar

Thank you so much! I just did a recording, it's at the top of the post.

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pause2ponder's avatar

I could hear and see the water "dancing on pebbles" in sunlight - delightful!

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Josefin Waltin's avatar

Thank you for encouraging me to record it!

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Ingrid Groot Zwaaftink's avatar

Love this!

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Josefin Waltin's avatar

Thank you! 😊

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Beth Kempton's avatar

Oh I love this Josefin. I hope you will allow more poems to be written through you.

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Josefin Waltin's avatar

Thank you, I will! 🌸

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Phoebe Freer's avatar

This is beautiful, flowing, lyrical. So much varied river imagery, but also suggestive of so much more. Lovely. 💜

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Josefin Waltin's avatar

Oh, thank you! 🤩

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Natalie Matson's avatar

This is a beautiful poem Josefin. It completely reflects the spirit of river. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing your work with us.

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Josefin Waltin's avatar

Thank you so much! 🌸

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WENDY CLARK's avatar

Beautiful Josefin, this is my favorite so far. Looking forward to reading more of your writing!

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Josefin Waltin's avatar

Oh, thank you! 😃

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Anita Kemp's avatar

So much movement in this piece carrying you along - powerful words!

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Josefin Waltin's avatar

Thank you! 🌸

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JC Voght's avatar

I hear the river and also feminine power throughout your piece. Power and resiliency. Thought provoking.

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Josefin Waltin's avatar

Thank you! 🌸

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JenP's avatar

Beautiful words. So atmospheric.

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Josefin Waltin's avatar

Thank you!

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Gill Brindley's avatar

Once again, beautiful writing. You have a knack of taking me along with you, my minds eye has the clearest picture of the river. Thank you.

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Josefin Waltin's avatar

Thank you, I’m so glad you joined me 😊

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Samantha's avatar

This is beautiful Josefina. Long may your pen keep moving, like the river x

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Josefin Waltin's avatar

Oh, thank you! 😘

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Ta Hiron's avatar

This is lovely, I can envision how your pen did move across the paper, it flows beautifully.

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Josefin Waltin's avatar

Thank you so much! 😊

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